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I think the setting is very well crafted but not used to it's full potential. What I mean by that is that the fabrics for example are i...

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I think the setting is very well crafted but not used to it's full potential. What I mean by that is that the fabrics for example are interesting, especially the lighter hemp cloth. However it's barely visible and I took notice of it only after some time of studying the picture (could be that I'm just distracted by the model here). It then starts to look like the fabric is binding her somehow. Or maybe it's a crude dress, almost entirely ripped and undressed. Both of these cases might look enormously interesting, captivating, or otherwise meaningful if fully depicted. Maybe you knew this, and the point is to make me think of these things.
I certainly think that a picture showing more of her surroundings would be interesting.
As a side note I see some details that look like accidental, but are nevertheless thought provoking. The way the model holds her left hand over the lower curve of her breast conceals it's size, and makes it look almost like a young man's chest. This effect with a little more boyish female model would make a striking difference between her upper body, and lower body that tells a more straightforward story of her sex.

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Hapsu-cosplay Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
Kiitoksia watchista! Watchaan takaisin.
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IrukukuChibi-San Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Hyvää synttäriä!! Pidä hauska päivä!! ^^ :hug:
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Elmoren Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013
Kiitos! Paljon onnea itsellesikin!
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IrukukuChibi-San Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Kiitoksia!
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littleglambertguy Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
Heyy. ~ you got tagged. c; [link]
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Thaki Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Hetken aikaa piti miettiä, että näyttääpä tutulta! :DD
Mut kiitos Watcheista! Meikäläinen alkaa stalkkiin kans!
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Hitsuwa Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
ah kiitos favista ja watchista!
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IrukukuChibi-San Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Hei! Ootko tulossa Frostiin?? : ))
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Elmoren Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
Juu tottakai :D Tässä teen AC:n Cloudia hiki hatussa, entäs itse?
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IrukukuChibi-San Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Oi oi!! Kuinkas sujuu?? Kyllä itse olen tulossa ja viimeinkin kunnon cossissa! Tulen FF I:n White Mage-kaavussa. :nana:
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